- Dec 14, 2009
- 7,234
- 19,629
No idea. It might be, I know Firefox (which I use) updated itself like two days ago..probably got all kerfluffled..Maybe it's the browser you're using?
Follow along with the video below to see how to install our site as a web app on your home screen.
Note: This feature may not be available in some browsers.
No idea. It might be, I know Firefox (which I use) updated itself like two days ago..probably got all kerfluffled..Maybe it's the browser you're using?
I use Firefox too and I've been having some of those problems too.No idea. It might be, I know Firefox (which I use) updated itself like two days ago..probably got all kerfluffled..
Seems right to me! Although I've only had the HS version of writing persuasive essays/speeches. Maybe describe how tired you are or how it feels a little more? But it's goodokay so i have to do a write up about drunk driving using pathos for my graphic design class to use for a flyer and i need to know if any of this makes sense at all, i havent written the ending yet because well i dont even know if i am doing this right to begin with anyways can yall please help me and tell me what you think? harsh criticism is wanted & need
Drinking and driving can be a lethal combination when paired together. It makes you begin to lose your concentration. Your body begins to react to the world around you at a slower pace then normal. It becomes harder for you to see how closely you are following the car in front of you and how close the car behind you is. Your vision begins to blur and you remove your hands from the wheel in an attempt to be able to see clearly again. You swerve back and forth until you begin to put your hands on the wheel again. You manage to control the vehicle once again and drive down the road to only to feel yourself becoming drowsy. Your body gives into the need for sleep and you shut your eyes. Crash. Your body lurches forwards as you crash into an obstacle, perhaps another vehicle or a tree maybe even a telephone pole. You awake the next morning confused and in pain. Your family surrounds your beside as you look up and see you mother, or your sibling, or fiancé crying at your beside stunned at the fact that you are indeed still alive.
Thank you! That's exactly the part I was wondering about I just felt I needed something else in there about not looking and everything.ssccxnce For some reason I can totally see it as a narration toa anti-drunk driving video. I mean that in a good way. The only part that confused me (which I didn't pick up on until the second time reading it) was " Your vision begins to blur and you remove your hands from the wheel in an attempt to be able to see clearly again." Just because to me it doesn't make sense to that taking your hands off will make help you to see again. Maybe say something like "Your vision begins to blur and you remove your hands from the wheel and rub your eyes in an attempt to be able to see clearly again" ?
It's very nicely written. The only thing I would say is watch how many times you're using the word "again".okay so i have to do a write up about drunk driving using pathos for my graphic design class to use for a flyer and i need to know if any of this makes sense at all, i havent written the ending yet because well i dont even know if i am doing this right to begin with anyways can yall please help me and tell me what you think? harsh criticism is wanted & need
Drinking and driving can be a lethal combination when paired together. It makes you begin to lose your concentration. Your body begins to react to the world around you at a slower pace then normal. It becomes harder for you to see how closely you are following the car in front of you and how close the car behind you is. Your vision begins to blur and you remove your hands from the wheel in an attempt to be able to see clearly again. You swerve back and forth until you begin to put your hands on the wheel again. You manage to control the vehicle once again and drive down the road to only to feel yourself becoming drowsy. Your body gives into the need for sleep and you shut your eyes. Crash. Your body lurches forwards as you crash into an obstacle, perhaps another vehicle or a tree maybe even a telephone pole. You awake the next morning confused and in pain. Your family surrounds your beside as you look up and see you mother, or your sibling, or fiancé crying at your beside stunned at the fact that you are indeed still alive.
I have a question, and maybe someone knows the answer?
So, on Monday, I puked 9 times. Yesterday, I didn't puke at all, but was dehydrated. Today, I feel like I'm gonna puke again and I feel the little "bug" in my stomach. I feel like I'm gonna puke again, but I can't. Am I over the "bug"?